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So my first attempt at drawing this male character. I think it came out well. This is an unnamed original character of mine based (very) slightly on my avatar. 
He's been bouncing around in my head for a while now, I just need to think of a name. I was thinking about Jonathan (but that would be kinda weird since I have a friend named that, and it's the name of a different OC of mine too) or maybe something Japanese-ish. Will have to think about it more.
I see a few problems with the hands and shoes. Any critique is welcome as always.
He's been bouncing around in my head for a while now, I just need to think of a name. I was thinking about Jonathan (but that would be kinda weird since I have a friend named that, and it's the name of a different OC of mine too) or maybe something Japanese-ish. Will have to think about it more.
I see a few problems with the hands and shoes. Any critique is welcome as always.
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Oooo...yum! He looks tasty!! 
I think you did a great job on the hand at his side. You made the arm the right length and the hand looks like it's resting properly in that position. The other one that is on his hip looks like it could be a bit bigger, but other than that, it looks fine.
Is it me, or does it look like he needs to have his pecks defined slightly? Not to make him muscular or anything, but just to add a little something on his chest. Maybe even add his clavicle or something.
I love his hair! The style is great and really fits the character. His face is also perfect for him. You really nailed it down with his face!
I'm wondering if the line leading up from his belly button is too thick. It draws attention from his belly button which should be slightly more noticable than the line from it. Perhaps lighten it? That is just a suggestion...it might be a style thing though...either way it is a kick ass drawing!
I think you did a great job on the hand at his side. You made the arm the right length and the hand looks like it's resting properly in that position. The other one that is on his hip looks like it could be a bit bigger, but other than that, it looks fine.
Is it me, or does it look like he needs to have his pecks defined slightly? Not to make him muscular or anything, but just to add a little something on his chest. Maybe even add his clavicle or something.
I love his hair! The style is great and really fits the character. His face is also perfect for him. You really nailed it down with his face!
I'm wondering if the line leading up from his belly button is too thick. It draws attention from his belly button which should be slightly more noticable than the line from it. Perhaps lighten it? That is just a suggestion...it might be a style thing though...either way it is a kick ass drawing!